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A Women's Touch by ~therealtigger:icontherealtigger:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Mature Romance > Open




Blackness, unlike any I’ve seen before,
But with a light at it’s roots

Her hair short and dark,

It frames her face in sharp contrast.

Her blue eyes look up from a face of innocent deviousness

Her appeal is great, her char insurmountable

I am hers.


Short was the time we spent together.

Long did it seem in my mind.


The feelings I felt have been unknown to me since I was young.

I don’t know what I did,

Don’t know why she left.

   The time we spent together is forever ingrained in my heart


I long for her to return, just to see her once more.


    My arms ache, my heart aches.

The wound is still fresh
The scabs not yet started
The blood still flowing


You are everything I’ve ever written.
©2005-2009 ~therealtigger
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Author's Comments

Written about a woman.


I mean, if you couldn't tell by the title.


She showed me a life where a woman can actually care what I'm thinking, feeling, hoping and dreaming.

She showed me what it's like to really be cared for.


but now she's gone.

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~inmyroom Mar 7, 2005, 2:19:30 AM
this is so sad and beautiful. well written.
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~therealtigger Mar 7, 2005, 2:22:11 AM
well shucks. Thank you :) I do try.

--
"life is good, until it shits in your lap. Then it's still good, but then you have to take a shower."

b-rad
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~GigglingTot Mar 7, 2005, 10:43:53 AM
elegant :D the ending is really strong, a real stab in the heart- not in a bad way. your diction is... well...

The wound is still fresh
The scabs not yet started
The blood still flowing
You are everything I’ve ever written.

yeah. that ^^ ^^;

--
"only when the last tree has died, and the last river been poisoned, and the last fish been caught will we realize that we can't eat money." based on a Cree saying
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~therealtigger Mar 7, 2005, 12:50:39 PM
well thank you.

Sometimes I worry that my writing style is too random, and that I jump around too much. it's usually just how my mind operates.

--
"life is good, until it shits in your lap. Then it's still good, but then you have to take a shower."

b-rad
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~Jhessimer Mar 7, 2005, 4:45:00 PM
Poems like this are always a favorite of mine. It shows how you'll live in pain for a while, and that's ok. It takes time to heal a hurt of something so was pure, trusting, everything, and the ONLY thing you ever wanted.
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~therealtigger Mar 7, 2005, 6:04:58 PM
Well, I do write a lot of those. :D

Mostly because that's just how I live :)

--
"life is good, until it shits in your lap. Then it's still good, but then you have to take a shower."

b-rad
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~Bananabelle Mar 7, 2005, 10:16:34 PM
I like it... It's very profound... It really speaks out.

I think I am :+fav:ing this... ^_^v

--
Dance like nobody's watching, and love like you've never been hurt before. Sing like nobody is listening... Live as if heaven is on Earth.

blog || LJ<
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~therealtigger Mar 8, 2005, 10:28:09 AM
YAY! Thank you! :D

--
"life is good, until it shits in your lap. Then it's still good, but then you have to take a shower."

b-rad
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